Smoking is bad as is. The harmful effects it does to ones body is deadly. Anyone smoking would develop health issues later on and could possibly die a painfully dead of cancer, lunge disease, bronchial infections and so on. Teenagers smoking is worse! Starting from such a young age could shorten theirs in half---they'll probably live till their 40.
Teenage smoking is caused out of rebellion. Some teens even thinks it cool to smoke, and others find it as a way to calm stress. There are also teenagers who are curious enough to actually try smoking a cigarette. Which, in all cases, they'll most likely be hooked on.
Problems that they'll most likely have is trouble or painful breathing, the development of cancer and other health issues related to smoking. Also, it could damage them socially. Meaning, their friends will stop talking to them ( depends if their friends smoke as well), and their parents will be disappointed and later wanting to disown their child. Not to mention, the feeling of being a social outcast because the majority of people aren't found of smoke.
In the third sentence, would should be "could" and in that same sentence lunge should be "lung". In the sentence that begins with "problems" i think there should be "Some" in front of the word "problems". Overall the blog was good I understood some of the problems of teenage smoking.
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