Thursday, September 23, 2010

The Bat who Could'nt Fly

Hello everyone! My name is Eli and I'm a bat who,well...lets say I'm physically challenged. I'm telling you this, so that people will suggest certain treatments to get my wings back in shape. If they cant, that's fine.
My problems started when I graduated from Bat Cave Middle School. My dream job was to become a superhero sidekick for Bat man. But, ever since the fight, I gave that dream up and settled for something in my range.  So, now I;m a spokesperson for physically challenged bats. I suppose you have been wondering about the fight I was in. I will tell you, but not too much, just enough for you to know. On the day that I would start my  flying-traffic lessons, I told my father not to accompany me to the Bat-Traffic School. I wanted to be "grown-up" and handle my own business for once. He agreed and I left. Time flew like a bird, and I was across the street from my destination--unfortunately, gang bats started to approach me. Of course, things did not end well. I was left with a bloody nose, scraped legs...and broken wings. So, there. You know my story. If you have any suggestions please tell me and I will pass it on to other disabled bats.

3 comments:

  1. Your sixth line has I;m instead of I'm, but overall good story

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  2. There are a few errors, but it does not affect the meaning and overall message

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